16 Sep 2016

Writing

 Writing, my favourite subject. This term for writing I have had a focus on sentences. There are 3 types of sentences. simple, compound and complex. I have Elly as my writing teacher This term.I have gotten way better at different sentences and adverbial phrases.This slide shows all about what I have been learning about this term. {\rtf1\ansi\ansicpg1252 {\fonttbl\f0\fnil\fcharset0 ArialMT;} {\colortbl;\red255\green255\blue255;\red255\green255\blue255;\red0\green0\blue0;} \deftab720 \pard\pardeftab720\partightenfactor0 \f0\fs26 \cf0 \cb2 \expnd0\expndtw0\kerning0 \mtl0\strokewi 

Feedback I like how you said writing was your favourite subject.

Feedforward Next time you could have an example of an sentence.

Evaluation:I think that I am getting way better at my writing.

callender art

Wow. I can't believe that it is already time for us to our callender art. This year for our callender art we have ben making drunk path. We chose a template out of the slide. We had to make a background piece and a painted piece. We put them together to make the final product. here is what mine looks like now. Do you like it?


feedback: I love your description.
feedfoward: Maybe next time you could add a photo of you making your marvouls bit of art.

Camden
evaluation: I think that I have done really well, considering this art is really really really hard

5 Sep 2016

T-reo Portfolio post

Kia ora. Maori language is an important part of no and at RSS poutama we get to learn it. This term for ET- reo we have been focusing on a whakataoki. Our first whakataoki was He aha Te mea nui o Te ao? He tangata! He tangata! He tangata! It means what is the most important thing in the world? The people! The people! The people! For this whakataoki we were tasked with making pictures of people. First we planned them out in our Writers notebooks. After we had a decent plan we started our good copy. I thought a lot about who I wanted to do. I chose to do Han Solo because I couldn't decide if I wanted to do me. This is my drawing of Han Solo. I hope you like it.
 Feedback : I like how you did Han solo.  
Feedforward: No feedforward:)
Evaluation:i think that I have done well because I was away for a week so I was a little bit behind.